Saturday, March 8, 2014

SOL 7/31: Fireworks

The stars shine bright in the sky.
Then the lights shoot up.
They explode way up in the night sky.
The light shimmers down.
It looks as if it was raining sparkles.
Then I hear the cracks of sound.
It’s like thunder but sharper.
I stare out the window, my faced pressed against the cold glass.
I watch them go up and explode one by one.
It’s a cold and dreary night but still is a beautiful one.
Watching them shoot up and explode is like an artificial sunset.

Overall these were the best 4th of July fireworks.

1 comment:

  1. I love how your poem has plenty of vivid description and internal rhyme.

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