It is 10 o'clock by the time we are at the hill. I sit on the bed of my dad's new Toyota Tacoma and start to strap on my boots, coat, helmet and adjust my goggles. I then Start to hike up the short hill to the trail. I pop on my skies leaning forward in my boots to test the flexibility. I then push off skating and pushing with my poles building speed. I'm slowly get faster and faster. I then tuck my hands over the small of my back holding my poles. I bend forward at the waist leaving my knees straight. The wind is blowing against my face. I push onward. I see a flat stretch ahead and deicide I have enough speed and come out of my tuck and start skating again. I make it to the other side and hop in line to catch the lift up. I get on the lift and stare down checking the conditions and scouting out the mountain. I see people skiing underneath me. I know it's gonna be a good day.
I hop off the lift and get blast by a fierce bitter wind immediately. I start to ski for the cover of the trees. I get in the trees and the wind immediately stopped. There is an undisturbed silence all around me. I then turn down hill and go. Right pole, left pole. It just comes to me. My hips turn back and forth like a pendulum. My chest is always facing down hill. I am leaning over my skies. I am looking two turns ahead of me my skies go where I guide them. It's like walking. I never forget and it comes naturally. The trees blur by my. My skies cut through the powder like butter. It feels like I am floating. Just gliding. I skid to a stop at the bottom. I just came off a big jump. I go down the cat track and go to the lift hoping on it for another eight minute ride of a four minute long run. My the time I come off I have another thirteen runs of experience under my belt.
I wake up the next morning and have a strange sense that I am going to have a little bit of Deja Vu.
Thats cool! I often feel the same way when I ski but you sound more experienced!
ReplyDeleteI really liked it when you described the skiing. I also loved the ending.
ReplyDeleteYou have some vivid descriptions that really draw readers into the scene. Also, the ending is a nice encapsulation of the piece as a whole.
ReplyDeleteTotally agree with the comments about the ending. It makes me wish for skiing, especially in some powder, to be a more recent slice of my life.
ReplyDeleteYou described everything so well and drew a very vivid picture. I also liked the ending a lot, it finishes of the piece nicely.
ReplyDeleteI really love how you described the top of the lift because i know that exact feeling, right when it gets super windy, nice slice
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